petemanpeter's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Nameless 6 Vol.2 Part 1/2]

Good, but I'm just not feeling it right now.

I really don't know why, but I didn't enjoy this like I though I would. I think that I'm just not in the right mood to watch something like this. I'll have to try watching it again later and see if my opinion changes, but for right now I just felt meh.

LazyMuffin responds:

hug? ):

[R0(|{]

so... bad...

There are so many things bad about this, where do I start.

First, what exactly is the point of this? Nothing happens. It is jsut a bunch or really crappy loops playing to music. Mabey you thought that this would be funny somehow. Random things are funny, but this isn't even funny random, it's just retarded.

Now, it's not all bad. You did show some decent potential with some of crappy looping clips, but you didn't put any time into making something people would like to watch. I bet if you actually tried you could make something halfway decent.

DONAnimation responds:

Well this was supposed to be a "cute" animation. It is supposed to be a random music video with cute graphics. It is just supposed to be entertaining, it doesn't always need a big animation with a story. It is supposed to be a random cute animation. Can't you respect that?

[Coffee'd Up: A.V.P. 2]

Great Script!!

I think that you did an awesom job writing this, I just wish the animation was more engaging as well. I understand that the focus is supposed to be the dialog and not really the visuals, but it still feels stale. Luckly the script is good enough to carry this. It kind of reminds me of the Professor Bros.

CalaverasCounty responds:

Thanks for the constructive response. Yeah, I have other projects where I sweat the animation a lot; this one basically exists for the writing and V.O. But, I can appreciate wanting a little more from the visuals. Thanks for giving it due, in spite of that.

I'm not familiar with Professor Bros. I may have to track that down.

["Oxygen Ad"]

Not Bad

I didn't realy mind the echo at all. I don't know how much the kids on newgrounds will enjoy learning, but you also had som funny points to cover up the educational parts.

I liked how you had a button to skip the boring parts, but it didn't work. The audio from the earlier part was still playibg even though I skipped head. You need to fix that.

Angry-Potato-Prod responds:

Glad you like the skip button.

I didn't know the old audio kept playing, how do you fix that?

[Going Postal: Extreme]

So original

It's hard to find an original flash on newgrounds. Most of the stuff is fipoffs of TV shows or other people's stuff. I have never seen anything like this before. Way 2 go!

I did think having the striotipical arab man was a little ofensive, but I don't really mind. Also, at the end the people are bigger than the houses. That made me laugh.

sorbitol responds:

I'm glad you liked the humour! Thankyou for the score, mate!

[Slash/ 2]

Cool

I liked this a lot. The action was fast but I could still folllow it and I knew what was going on even with the badly translated subtitles.

I would recomend that you have an english speaker look over your english sutitles before you made it. It looked like you used an on-line translator or just did a bad job yourself. I would be willing to help you if you need it in the future.

PS If you are an english speaker, then I'm sorry, but you suck.

megaener responds:

haha.... thanks, I'm good English speaker, not good English Writer, lol...
and thanks any way I'll ask for your help if I need it some time!!... :)

[It all begins with an eye]

Meh

I love random stuff, and I don' care if it doesn't make any sense, the problem is that this flash just isn't entertaining. Be more creative with it.

caboos1 responds:

...i try my best lol, im thinking about giving up iv been practicing for 5 years and i still suck. and wors than most of those newbs with the trial to.:( well ill try next time

[Whuttevvah 6]

It's getting old

You've been submitting a lot of stuff recently, and I have liked it, but it's starting to get stale. You need to up the anty(sp?) and start spending more time on each one. Don't fall into a groove of doing the same thing over and over because people will get tired of it. That doesn't mean that you should stop making this type of flash, but you need to start thinking of more original ideas.

For example, I have noticed that in every one you use the tank a lot and you always have some thing about kirby. Idk if that's your trademark or something, but it's getting old.

I just want to see you perform to your potential. I want the next one to blow my mind.

Glunnator responds:

Heh. thanks.
The reason I've been submitting loads is because I made all these ages ago and finally decided to put them all up. I'm currently still working on nm 7.
Nm 7 is going to be a piece of art. Or at least I thinks so.
Also I'm planning on adding a preloader in it, because some points are very.... blurred. Ah, You'll see ;)

[Whuttevvah 2]

Me gusta

I liked it, but I am confused about the author's comments. You said there was a Whattevvah 1, but I couldn't find it, and then you said that they refer to eachother which seems impossable because the whole thing is just random transformations. But still good.

Glunnator responds:

Yes, nm 1 was blammed. It had no music.
The references are like th "Omg not kirby" part. there was a "Omg kirby" not the first. And in the third. and not kirby in the fourth. etc. :D

[SMB 4: The Beach]

good, but not as good as it could be.

I liked this, and I think that animating D-day with sprites is a good idea. Some sugestions, which im sure the other reviwers have pointed out.
1) Voice acting: Without it it sucks
2) fade out the music. It just stoped at a few points
3) Make better blood graphics. They looked terrable.

I know my spelling sucks, but you should be able to tell what I mean. Keep working and it could be 10 times better. Also make sure to make the sequel.

BurntIceProductions responds:

i'm remaking a all of them after the 5th movie